Just Scribbles

TANKA 

 

In winter I like to light an old oil lamp . . . there's something

about it that often reveals not what is but was

 

pale yellow lamp light

in the old tarnished mirror

shimmer and shadow

that one old love's reflection

even more beautiful now

 

 

 

HAIKU

  

Passing a winter stubble field and being reminded

of last years' summer drought

 

in sun-scorched pasture

lathered horse bathing in dust

still no sign of rain





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2013-12-27 at 19:17

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
Both of these are superb, but the first one especially speaks to me. I can't accept either of these poems as "Just Scribbles," though - they're too good.
2014-02-05