I fell in love too fast
to notice you were catching up at a slower pace


coffee dates

I'm the problem
And the problem is me
I fell in love too fast
to notice you were catching up at a slower pace
I feel like am at your mercy
At some point I don't care at all
Many beautiful women
I can have another just like that
But the coffee might kill me
I dont want more going out
I want to come in
To a home
Warm and welcoming
You make me that cup of coffee



Poetry by Barthoromeopoet
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Written on 2014-03-18 at 06:33

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The jagged rhythm of the verse so clearly reflects the jagged path of infatuation and love and all that blah blah. Well done.
2014-03-27



This is such a direct request that is touching in its candor. I understand the feeling exactly and can relate at this very moment. How did I miss this? It's wonderful writing.
Ashe
2014-03-27


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2014-03-20


Nabeela Altaf
This poem says something. To be honest, drinking coffee everyday with the same person is bound to produce consequences.
2014-03-18


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
A nicely written sensitive take on an all too familiar scenario.
2014-03-18