When you are weak('come, let's hug.')



Some times I need you
I need you to be weak for me
instead of me but in my presence
Some times I want you to react
verbalize my silenced first reaction
because I know better and I will think
further but I need you I want you to
become your inner first reaction so I
can fight for a better world for you
a place where the personification of
your, our intuitive reaction can live safely
untouched. When something beyond our
control happens react. Your reaction is
needed. Not because you alone will make a
difference but you will activate people like me
but beware as soon as you try to manipulate
the knowledge I just gave you You then represent
death and will be ignored, regarded as non existent.

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2014-05-06 at 01:59

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Yeah, this reaches depths hard to explain for me, but it does... like where you send my thoughts always.
2014-05-06


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
This is fantastic ecstasy NSW
yet one dares not comment upon
fear of DEATH! ;)
2014-05-06



On the paradoxical line 2, there is a quote about a different subject that says: " "The weaker makes the other stronger by being weak," ...
Ashe
2014-05-06


Rob Graber
In this enjoyable and inspiring write, I like especially the paradoxical line 2.
2014-05-06



This is so beautiful and such an open request for understanding.
Of course, I love the title. Well done. Everyone needs to read this.
This is so important:

"Some times I want you to react
verbalize my silenced first reaction
because I know better and I will think
further but I need you I want you to
become your inner first reaction so I
can fight for a better world for you"
2014-05-06


Nabeela Altaf
I couldn't stop reading this! Great work. Also the title's so attractive :)
2014-05-06