Thank you Ashe for the spark of inspiration:) I got inspired while writing a comment to her poem: Siempre Para Ti. My creative text here needs some editing but not now: ) *enjoy*




Dancing without dancing



"there is no before and after when we are together because together we become all we have while playing inside the universe exploring ourselves together some tried to understand (the universe)and others keep trying but we dance with the universe and we need to know nothing and it doesn't matter what we knew because together we see everything anew and we desire nothing because in that moment we are all we desire and not the result(the origin of desire) of unfulfilled moments that long to come to life inside our bodies -so we can dare to become who we are(who we know that we are) You are not to become what keeps hurting me Or my savior Nor do I We are .when we are. as we are. Pleased to feel ecstatic for no apparent reason bittersweet the goodbye every time we need to think of what we desire and how to make it happen because it is not the truth"





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Written on 2014-05-20 at 19:44

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Nabeela Altaf
But I think you should lose the last two brackets or incorporate them somehow into the flowing sentence.
:)
2014-05-21


Nabeela Altaf
I read this out loud. What you have written is a most beautiful piece of writing. It is intricate but simple. Applaud.
2014-05-21



Fantastic thought!

It reminds me of a though I had recently:
It's the greatest irony.
Why do anything, why feel, why live, why think...
If in the end, all we are will be only someone's thought,
as the universe moves on and we with it.
2014-05-21