the turn of the ticking

the turn of the ticking
indulgent dark water sky
howls in a one syllable silence
cricketing time into night

softly dreaming you
I spell for other days
to find you coerced in me
in salty breaks of love




Poetry by Bob
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Written on 2014-07-21 at 00:12

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
This blows my imagination and feelings to all sorts of realms! Love your use of language here. I of course most like all of the lines, but if I were to pick a few, S1 L3 and S2 L4 grab me most strongly... I'm a truly happy fan :)
2014-07-23



Are you the poet laureate in Stockholm? If not, you should be.
These images of feelings are so vivid and so beautifully expressed that they leave the reader breathless. I know I keep saying this, but it's a 'sigh' sort of poem. It's the beauty of the words, the imagery, and the feelings that are all part of the poem.
2014-07-21