Futuristic Smiles

I think I saw your smile
reflected in that rather
dingy shop,
you know the one,
or has it closed?

Anyhow between
the drapes and
the cobwebs
I saw that wink,
the one I kicked
you for and you
spun me round
and even though
it was raining
and I hadn't an umbrella
you held me
so tight
and we kissed
eyelashes
splashing
we didn't notice
and afterwards
we walked
holding hands
as I caught teardrops
from dripping hair.

I don't really
miss the kisses
the hand in the
small of my back,
I miss the us of us
and futuristic smiles
that never came
to fruition



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Written on 2014-08-25 at 17:33

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Åsa Andersson
"the us in us" - loved it.
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This is so beautiful! The feelings you leave the reader with are so heavy and nostalgic of the best and saddest of memories.
2014-08-26



you can bring the memories back you!
2014-08-25


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
"The us of us." Nice!
2014-08-25



Lovely poem with such sadness,
2014-08-25