In

Indispensable
is the way you run the backs of your hands
across the backs of mine.

Indescribable
is the whisper of your crushed-velvet voice
against my tousled hair.

Inexplicable
is the way our longing for each other battles
against our staunch upbringings.

Inconspicuous
is the subtley glorious twining of your arms
around my shivering waist.

Incomparable
is the shimmer of the perfect smile spreading
across your perfect face.

Inelegant
is the way we scamper, smiling and laughing
along the sandy riverbank.

Inaccurate
is this summing up of the many things I love
about you

But I'm afraid that
it must suffice
for right now I'm lost
IN
your eyes
and it makes me so very
Inarticulate...





Words by PoeticProcrastination
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Written on 2006-04-24 at 03:12

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IronicBanana
It definitely has alot of emotion in it, and I LOVE the end!!!!
2006-04-25


Hasani
I really liked this.. It speaks alot that I can relate to and was extremely well put together. Really really nice :-)
2006-04-24


Mike
this is really something special..good stuff
2006-04-24


CherryFairy
AWWW!!! I know I overuse "aww" too much, but, AWWW!!!
That is soooo cute!! I love IN. I love inside. Teehee.
I love it!!
You are really in a very writey-mood lately, aren't you? (Writey... teehee...)
2006-04-24


SlipThruCracks
So this is an interesting concept. [Ha, I said 'in.'] I like how [though I'm going to bet you didn't mean to do this] it sort of starts out really flowery and in-check [I said 'in' again!], but then as you go along, it sort of... this word has a negative connotation, but I don't mean it negative, but, as it goes along, it sort of degenerates. In a good way. And you can tell that you're trying to be all good at the start but by the end he's just pulled you in so much that he's totally unravelled all your self-resolve and you're just like oh snap I'm not holding back.

And sometimes, not holding back is the most beautiful thing in the world.
2006-04-24