WORLDS OF SORROWS IV


Worlds of sorrows.
No tomorrows.
Mind hollows.
Identity follows.

Bloody nails.
Forgiveness fails.
Guilty hands.
Golgata-lands.

Whipped and stoned.
Broken-boned.
Humanities loss.
Everlasting cross.

Dead but resurrect.
Noone to respect
but the man who lost it all,
and refused to take the fall.

Mind hollows.
Identity follows.
No tomorrows.
Worlds of sorrows.









Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2006-04-25 at 00:52

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Kathy Lockhart
Power driven in words and structure. Solid in its point well made. kathy
2006-04-25


Shas Ramlogan
This is one of the only poems i've read on this site so far that has really hit home with me. Maybe because i usually dwell on the same themes and i'm a big fan of the brief but passionate structure. Great poetry ntl.
2006-04-25