Lost in You

Swirling
torrents
dragging
me
down.

I choke on my own insecurities
As these currents dance
In their haunting ritual.
They force me to join in..
And my resistance is futile.
I beg for my release,
But no one hears my screams.

Swirling torrents pulling me down.
I want to leave this place;
It's murky depth
Chills me to the bone.

Swirling torrents tugging me down.
Release me from your hatred.
I used to admire your intense beauty,
But now you do nothing but frighten me.

Swirling
torrents
pulling
me
down.
I am lost in you,
Never to be found.



Poetry by Amanda Manmohan
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Written on 2006-04-25 at 04:15

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Zoya Zaidi
"I choke on my own insecurities"
Again a beautiful line.
You write passionate powerful poetry Amanda Manmohan!
(((hugs))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-07


Kathy Lockhart
Intense, powerful, profound. Great expression of emotions! Well done.
2006-04-26


Hasani
Amanda this was amazing, the first time I read it it didn't impact on me so much but now it's so much more vivid. The imagery is fantastic. I'm so happy you're sharing this :-)
2006-04-26


Onyeka Nwelue
I am impressed. What a wonderful text? Great and whimsical.
2006-04-25