Faithful friend

sit down and have some coffee
won't you

black

overturn my every thought
why don't you

fragment

crawl into my bed at night
you're welcome

fear



Poetry by Åsa Andersson
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Written on 2015-02-26 at 16:24

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I love it! I often am visited by similar friends.
2015-02-26



Very nicely written.
~Ashe
2015-02-26


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
"The opposite of love is fear," is something I've heard, I'm not sure of its origin. I think it utterly trite. Yet, in the context of your poem, it does have some validity.

That you use the word "welcome" gives me significant pause.
2015-02-26


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Very well written! I like how you build up the word fear with the previous words! Well done!!!
2015-02-26