Fight

I walk through
echoes of my thoughts
and I see shadows
lingering close by,
oblivious to my loudest calls.
I am lonely
though not a bit alone.
Shaken,
but not taken.
A wall looms ahead,
enough said,
I will not go down

Today is not the day,
I die.

 

 





Poetry by sagi
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Written on 2015-02-28 at 20:48

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How beautiful to read your words again! I hadn't seen this when I wrote you that you were missed here. There is a definite struggle going on in your mind and you will win, I know.
Love the determination and strength of the poem, and the human feelings that come through.
~Ashe
2015-03-01



Like this kind of writing which steps outside the norm:)
2015-02-28