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At The Botanical Garden

 

“Color is my daylong obsession, joy, and torment.
 I can only paint what I see."

     - Claude Monet

 

  

 

Being nearsighted too, I could be at Giverny

Though it is lotus and not his lilies shifting

A little against their tethers in the still pond,

The same stippled dappled light on the water,

And here too willows are never still and one

Thinks of him brushing this part of the canvas

Again and again, adding each shade of green

And blue from his palette, color upon color,

Until there is the one that is this one moment's

Shade and light, knowing it is changing even

As he paints it, and how only he had seen it,

No edges anywhere, each thing part of another,

Seeing everything, even here, from a distance.

The important thing, he said, is never use black.

 





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2015-04-28 at 15:53

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Wow just wow never use black a great advice for all
2016-07-10


Kathy Lockhart
A beautiful word painting. Lovely and soothing.
2016-05-20


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2016-04-28


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very good. I always wondered what it would be like to be beneath the water and look up at the lilies. Very nice to read :)
2015-04-30


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice, Fog. You have us at his shoulder, looking.
2015-04-30


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this my friend. I've always Had an affinity for Monet.
2015-04-29



I really like the tripity-trip sound that juxtaposing 'stippled' and 'dappled' makes.

Wise of him to nix the black. There are very few 'pure' tones in real life--mostly endless gradients of color. Not really much white either. I think maybe you've captured the reason why so many artists are unhappy--they see things exactly as they are, and sometimes don't like what they see.

Great poem. This will be one of my favorites of yours.
2015-04-28



Your words have brought him to life.
This is visually beautiful:)
2015-04-28