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Of Anything

When there's too much
Of everything
And not enough
Left of anything
Remains
To be found,
What has been lost
Long ago
Turns into grief like ☔ rain
Stage sets torn down
Packed up leaving town
On a historical
Empirical
Ectoplasmic
Refugee of rusted
Dreams oxidized rubies stain
All that we touch
Remains
When there's too much
Of everything
And not enough
Left of anything



Poetry by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-05-27 at 04:32

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Extremely vivid and well thought out. The play must move on.
2015-05-29



I really liked the image of the stage sets torn down. I genuinely liked this poem, and that's saying something.
2015-05-28


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Too much and not enough both express dissatisfaction a need for something more or something less but either way each has a specific kind of reality in mind manipulating reality can be a good thing and a bad thing or a chance for introspection.

When I read this:
What has been lost
Long ago
Turns into grief like ☔ rain

It reminded something I am currently try to start writing about. About the right now people the forever and ever people and the Always people:D Oh I dare you can you write a poem about one of them or all of them and what do you think about them or what they can do to your life?
2015-05-27