Yeah



The powers of spring
in full bloom in June
the last path of some species
die leaving new things to grow

the last days of this month
and all I have is greatness around

To leave that world for a better one
is the hardest thing for man

but for you, flower
it is just another day of summertime

and for my face
another smile
to keep
in wintertime
when all seems dead and gone



Poetry by Ivan R
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Written on 2015-06-28 at 03:02

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Gentle, really filled with a tender honesty and love:)
Such a beautiful poem:)
2015-07-04


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice. We should absorb as much as we can of the season's life.
2015-06-30


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Welcome back Ivan :-) and with a beautiful poem - our eagerly awaited season with her beauty and spoils to share with us

Elle x
2015-06-28


countryfog
We can learn much about the nature of life and death from Nature, as you have, and have expressed so well.
2015-06-28


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
That's a pleasant thought.
2015-06-28



I find the thoughts expressed in this poem to be very deep in both the physical and metaphysical range. The simplicity of the first verse only adds to its depth. In the third verse you delve into the metaphysical in a very significant manner. I like it.
~~Ashe
2015-06-28