And that is what it was :-)


A good day

Today is a good day,
my baby attained a 1st class degree
in creative writing,
we then bought
swimming trunks and goggles
an Iphone,
went a little pink
on the beach
swam and played
ate petit morsels
and drank bottled water,
drove with the hood down
and made merry
with a skillet pan
and water melon slices,
it was a good day
and the sun shone
and we had fun.



Poetry by Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-06-29 at 20:18

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And what more do we need to make us happy? Nothing...the best things in life are free!
2015-07-04


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice! No ambiguity here, no shadowy recollections. I do wonder what went into the skillet. Surely, not the watermelon.
2015-07-02



Congratulations to your son:)
Sounds like a truly beautiful day:)
Cxx
2015-07-01


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
How nice. I am sure that he will remember the day with you rather than the degree. It sounded like such fun and was so nice to read :)
2015-07-01


Ivan R
" and the sun shone
and we had fun."

Gets it all, the feel of the poem, the great things done, made, felt, a short story good enough for anyone
2015-07-01


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
Celebrating a son is a joyful exercise. I think my greatest joy is the fact that my son has accomplished more than I when I was his age! He is destined for greatness... But of course I'm biased. :-))
2015-06-30



A great day indeed, Elle. -)
~Ashe
2015-06-30


shells
Love those sort of days, me thinks son takes after his mother with a creative writing degree ;-)
2015-06-30


John Ashleigh
A lovely and light hearted piece which is actually quite nostalgic. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2015-06-30


Chaucer Whethers
Sounds very good indeed. :-)x
2015-06-29