To be loved

The suggestion of a ring
Conversing about plans for our future

our future

Entertaining the hitherto unknown territory of
a wonderful, beautiful man

only wanting me
all of me

as his

Wife.



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Written on 2015-07-18 at 12:17

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes it is a wonderful commitment to love and to a future.

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2015-07-20



When two people find each other, it's a beautiful thing. Probably miraculous.

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Mood: 5
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2015-07-19


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
there are so many ways, an infinite number of ways, to express love. your poem is simple and elegant, and i cannot imagine a need to say more. it feels complete.
2015-07-18