Te Amo


ESPAÑOL Primero


Las cosas tontas que te dije, fueron solo sobre mi

las discusiones que prendi, fueron cosa

de dos tristes corazones


Y tu, escuchando mi tristesa

viste mi tontera, te distes vuelta

por un momento

pero segiste la estrella

la cual mostraba donde el amor nacio


Amor, que te cuento de mi dia?

Estuve triste, casi deje de trabajar

no podia pensar

solo sentir el sentimiento tuyo


cuando lleges, te bajes en el aeropuerto

y yo te estoy esperando

con dos billetes para el tren,

de primera clase


vamos a sentir que los dos nos amamos

intensamente, completamente, locamente

deliciosamente rico

y las caras de nosotros van a lucir

como luce el sol en el rio




NOW IN ENGLISH:


The stupid things I said, were all about myself

the discussions I began

were about our two hearts saddened

and you, listening to my idiocy,
turned for a brief moment

but then, followed the star

pointing out the place where love was infant


My love, what to tell about this day?

I have been sad,

almost quit my job

unable to think

sensing your sentiment



But when you come,
landing at the airport

I will be waiting for you

with two tickets in hand,
first class
on the train ride back home
to us

we will so then
see

that love that exists between us

instantly, completely, crazy

delicious



And our faces will smile

like the radiating sun

does

on the surface of the waters, the pillars of life;

on rivers, glaciers, lakes and
snow,

the light it mirrors

the light it shows






Poetry by Ivan R
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Written on 2015-07-18 at 22:11

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Mi amor,volvi a leer este bello poema esta ves en nuestro propio idioma donde tus palabras las oigo más intimas aún.
Precioso en los dos idiomas. Ya pronto será una realidad otra vez.+++
2015-07-30



Well, what a lovely language is Spanish, especially enchanting in this context, we feel. The honest tone with which the poem opens is pleasantly sustained throughout the piece and there is an energy to the third verse that one might find thrilling, were one capable of finding thrill. 'FT is far too ill for that sort of thing,' Ms Bird confides. Nevertheless we wish you well with this encounter and we echo Larry's praise of the end.
2015-07-24


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is very nice, Ivan. I love how it sparkles at the end.
2015-07-21


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice. Good luck and happy journeys :)
2015-07-20



Aaaaahhh,

Advice to next reader...

Read
Inhale sentiment
Retain
Repeat
2015-07-19



Muy hermoso poema de amor. Describes well the excitement (and anxiety) of falling in love.
2015-07-19



This is lovely.
A fraught journey but leading to such deep love!
Fingers crossed for you both:)
2015-07-19



Gracias por el poema.
~Ashe*
2015-07-18