Writing To Miss Dickinson

 

The motivation in art is always the same, to renew contact

with the world, to maintain a creative flow between the inner

and outer worlds, to have them, in fact, one.

          John Haines

 

 Light is the symbol of truth.         

          James Russell Lowell

 

 

 

My window too frames the view, as though

It knows that to take it all in would be

More than we can completely apprehend.

A late summer evening, not in Amherst

Where you look out thinking tell all the truth

But tell it slant, I sense it too, here, how

 

We best see things obliquely, how at dawn

And dusk light slants rather than pierces

Through the pines, bending around them,

Shadows softer and only the edges are lit.

At one edge of the frame are maples, not yet

Making their own light, wind-blown seeds

 

In hedgerow bramble and blackberry thorns;

And in the corner a white feather fluttering

In a spider web, brushstrokes of shimmer.

Under the pine trees a yellow finch so delicate

It seems nothing more than a dab of color,

Light-glint in shadow, weightless as a butterfly.

 

All these years to tell you that you were right,

That however closed in we are by our solitude,

There is equally and always another side of it;

That in looking out there is also an entering,

Knowing that we become part of what we see,

Not one glaring view but each thing in its light.

 

Truth must dazzle gradually or every man be blind.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2015-07-25 at 15:43

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
I too know little of her work but I understand her life through reading about her. You have portrayed her feelings of isolation and her stoic acceptance so well here. We must take life in framed pictures obliquely or be overcome by it's reality. Very nice work indeed.
2015-07-29



This is a joy to read, my friend :-)
I haven't read Emily Dickinson and I'm not sure how much to draw from her in commenting on these lines. I hope you'll forgive a simple contribution from me.
As you are aware, I delight in nature and this description fills me with happiness. Pines, maples, seeds, bramble, feather, finch – all is expertly observed and told, and beautiful in the slanting light. I love to watch this sort of scene myself, glancing up from work throughout the day, and I appreciate the musings on solitude towards the end of the piece.
Applause!
2015-07-28


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A double pleasure. Your poem is quite good, Fog, and, thanks to Pony, I was led to Tell all the truth but tell it slant, the only Emily Dickinson poem I've ever read which didn't quickly collapse into incoherence and botched rhymes.
2015-07-26



This makes me think of the two main schools of Buddhism. Zen which emphasizes sudden enlightenment with a koan or whacking someone with a stick to awaken them with a thunderbolt. And then the Middle Way which stresses a gradual awakening: steady and regular meditation and patience.

I agree with your poem that it's better to learn our truths in a quiet, ongoing way. Beautiful scenery can't be enjoyed if you keep driving--everything is just a blur. You have to stop the car, get out, and walk up to the mountain.
2015-07-25


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
yours is a gorgeous interpretation of a wondrous poem, and i think you understand "Success in Circuit lies".
2015-07-25