Speechless

                       

                        And what if after so many words

                        the word itself doesn’t survive.

                          Cesar Vallejo, “And What If After”

 

 

 

This is how it was then, at dawn perhaps

Or dusk, the two palomino stallions quiet

In the pasture, or it is spring and the stream

Flood rushing, its sound staying in the stones,

Or autumn and the soft falling of the orchard

Bitter windfalls after hard sleet and the last

Bruised blackberries dusted with first frost.

No words mattered then, no one to tell them to,

And now here these years later how the shape

Of this blacksnake slipping silently through

Tall summer parched grass saying more than

Any words of mine, now or then, of leaving.





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2015-08-01 at 16:24

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This quite eerie and primordial in a way. It has the quality of time standing still. The ambiance is great and gives visions of Eden in autumn.
2015-08-04


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a very nice poem, but I disagree with what it says. The words are what forge meaning out these images.
2015-08-02



You create an eerie atmosphere, post-apocalyptic, without mankind to break the language of nature. Beautiful imagery and a sense of mystery and peace throughout. Lots of atmosphere
Ashe
2015-08-01