Grace Notes

grace notes:  music notation used to denote several

kinds of musical  ornaments, occurring as notes of

short duration before the sounding of the relatively

longer-lasting note which immediately follows them

    The Oxford Dictionary Of Musical Terms

 

  

 

Dawn, or nearly so, the usual cardinals and one

Red-winged blackbird calling and contending in

The pines for an hour already, and among them

To the crabapple tree in its second year of dying,

This year bereft of flowers, leaves already brown

And falling, more brittle branches beneath than

On it, a tree the birds avoid even now knowing

The next summer storm or surely next winter's

Ice will come to claim it, comes this yellow finch

Barely bigger than a butterfly, and settles there,

And suddenly, almost impossibly, the tree breaks

Into song.

 

 

 

The whole poem depends on that penultimate line break

 

and there is a back story of sorts, realizing when I came

 

to the end of mine that I had him in the back of my mind -

 

a little more than fifty years ago James Wright abandoned

 

his rhymed and metrical poems for free verse (and was

 

severely criticized for it) and he ended a poem called "A Blessing"

 

as I did mine.  His poet friends were astounded, it was as though

 

he had broken the final link between who he had been and who

 

he was then.  Now of course there's nothing astonishing about it,

 

though I hope still a bit of surprise.

 

 





Poetry by countryfog
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Written on 2015-08-19 at 18:09

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This is excellent, my friend :-)
I'm familiar with grace notes and I admire the way you've incorporated the musical feature into this poem. I love the descriptions of the birds and the dying crabapple tree, ending in a surprise.
The footnote on James Wright is very interesting and all at BirdBrains have added this poet to their long and lengthening list.
Applause!
2015-08-24


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
A wonderful poem and a clever title. The way you describe the tree made me feel sad. The sign of a great writer.
2015-08-23


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done, Fog.
2015-08-19