another piece composed in my invented form.


crickets in the night

symphonic sounds
of
creaking crickets
in
nulled night
is
in infinite
union:
forever-never
expressed
in seconds
of
dying time

11/27/15




Poetry by Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-11-30 at 01:40

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
The syncopation is nice.
2015-12-06



I like how the short phrases bring this poem together. It has the feeling of a Haiku but a little longer. It has that kind of strength.
Ashe
2015-12-02