so fill us with good things

there was a vacancy in a place
where an abyss engulfed chastity
a concept strange and quite suspect
in a world were we value prospect;
a rarity to sanely slumber at night

and receive sagely uttered sentiment
whose aid in these moonlit promises
birth occupancy in vacillating crises
perhaps a constancy redeems piety;
another word that reveals this malady



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Poetry by arquious The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-12-10 at 11:50

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I agree with William. Also I applaud the poetic and highly quotable lines. Bravo
2015-12-12



This has a consistent and tightly constructed cadence and interesting syntax. Though it uses contemporary poetic techniques, such as all lower-case, it has a very classical, traditional feel to it. Enjoyed.
2015-12-10