The Man

Get in the box!
STAY

their voices terrified

because the dam is so easily burst



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-05-06 at 04:35

Tags Authority  Defy  Defiance 

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PoeticProcrastination
wow, indeed. I read the first two lines and I was like WHOA and it's like a punch to the stomach that you didn't see coming. Except that the end is a lot more rewarding than a punch to the stomach.

Nice text!
2006-05-07



talk about drama!
wow.... it could be treated with a longer text but I fear that would upset the clarity and distinct punctuated moment.

you have me enjoying..... bravo!
2006-05-06