part of a song i wrote last night...7 yards away from my recently titled ex girlfriend


Fade away


i know you dont love me
i know you dont care
i know you want me to dissapear
so ill fade away....fade to grey
in this game,i just cant win
my kaleidoscope crumbles deep within
and i fade away...fade to grey

all colour has been lost from me
clear for everyone to see
emotion left my body...im looking pale
as i fade to grey....fade away

clear for me to see
out in open air
curtains fall as i dissapear
and i fade away...fade to grey
with the absence of darkness
absence of light
the battle's been going on but ive lost this fight
and i fade away...fade to grey

fade to grey




Poetry by Steven Mawer
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Written on 2006-05-06 at 11:38

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Zoya Zaidi
Ilike the way yo have used the colour grey to reflect the mood you are predominantly in.
Another nice piece by your talented pen!
I have come many times to your page and ejoyed your writes. Only just when I get down to penning my opinion, comments etc, either the light goes off or the Internet connection! So, today is the lucky day. I'll take this opportunity to say you are very good. Damn good!
***Hugs***
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-06


Onyeka Nwelue
I do not want to repeat whatever I have said.

Enough is enough to the poet...lol
2006-05-06