Daydream


Sitting writing,
background music white noise,
oblivious as I window chase,
thoughts are out there
on the clouds, deep shadows
dramatic enough
to silhouette trees
and I swear I've just see
them reverse direction,
I'm mesmerized.







Poetry by shells
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Written on 2016-02-15 at 01:08

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A very pretty image of the inversion of inner and outer reality. I like the sense of meditation and wonder.
2016-02-19


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Sometimes a daydream and reality merge. Nice.
2016-02-19


Ivan R
This is great, so many turns, still keeping the beat, and a question in the overall of things ... what is real? Great poem this one*
2016-02-16