| A Monstrous Beauty by M.A.Meddings
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2006-10-20
Very good, solid piece of writing that left me wanting more.
Ian
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| A Mermaid In A Starry Sky
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2006-10-20
If I had so many lovely images in my waking hours, I would not worry about sleeping. A first class read.
Ian
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| A Ballerina's Opinion of Doors
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2006-10-18
I believe many doors will open for you in the future. You have a talent I would die for.
Ian
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| No more "poetic" chat
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2006-10-18
Bob, do not want to seem a pain but, your second to last stanza could read even better if you again remove the 'and'... to read as follows:
'There will be another coming
where masters of expression
will crush the easy way out
demanding content of interest'
Hope this helps as I really enjoyed reading this piece of work.
Regards,
Ian
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| No more "poetic" chat
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2006-10-18
Bob, not wanting to get into the subject matter of your poem, I would just like to say that your last two stanzas could be improved by removing the 'and' from the last lines...I believe it lets your poem down right at the end.
Ian
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| Halloween Night
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2006-10-17
Kathy, well written, fun read. You managed to get it all in.
Ian
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| the peaceful suffocation
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2006-10-16
Really enjoyed your style of writing. I believe you are a poet who's best pieces are yet to come.
Ian
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| A Crippled Heart.
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2006-10-14
Well written and very readable.
Ian
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| On My Way To Meet My Cravings
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2006-10-13
Very sad, well written piece.
Ian
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| Twilight of Love
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2006-10-13
Zoya, a wonderful piece of writing, that had me enraptured right to the end.
Ian xxx
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| Burning Bright Before Dying Out...
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2006-10-11
A real treat to read.
Ian
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