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embarrassed

2017-02-28
Very witty. So helpless is the case then........keeping it all inside like a good poet is at least commendable. Venom is better there. It won't poison you.......


Cry As They Waltz Me Away

2017-02-08
Agree with Kathy. I could hear the music behind this one. Great stuff.


Leaving

2017-02-08
So clever, sharp and true. Great words, great meaning.


Why?

2017-02-07
Clever and concise. Really like this style.


song bird

2017-02-02
Lightly and softly written but deeply felt. Enjoyed this poem.


sciences

2017-02-02
Good observation. He would still have been making and creating something no doubt. Being the ' cleverest '.


Matinee Sunday Afternoon

2017-01-10
So clever. Like it all; but the last 6 lines........bravo I think.


Over The Fence

2017-01-02
I really like this. No unnecessary words, and a clear picture.


by heart?

2017-01-01
Neat


The Gift of Life and Death - Short story

2016-12-14
Brilliant piece of writing Eli!!


Dreaming. The Triolet Challenge.

2015-01-24
Thanks for the encouraging feedback people. I hope Noel Coward will forgive the borrowing of his " mad dogs " theme.


WOW! You're Growing up

2012-05-07
Our own children. Such darling things. No matter what he does in the future, just tell him he's great. Can't go wrong!! Have fun.


Drawbridges Are All That

2012-01-15
Exactly, Jenks. Thanks.


Beauty in Anything

2009-07-11
Really good. A great observation on the wonder of children, and their ability to be fascinated with anything. Well spotted, and well composed.


Tree I thank you

2009-07-11
Love trees. Don't really appreciate the line about the heavenly father , given it has god connotations and being a total non believer, but all the other sentiment I get exactly. "This is your life too." I like that especially.