| Would You Forget?
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2010-01-09
Your words kind of elevate the mind, as if the reader is looking upward with you toward some future event of perhaps weather, or some other incipient revelation.
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| Barnacles
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2010-01-09
I love all the colorful expressions and imagery. I love this theme and the rhyming also. The short verses make it a quick read and the pictures it invokes hold ones mind in fascination.
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| do you poet
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2010-01-09
I really enjoyed reading this. I love the comparisons with food; really brings home the idea. Loved the open ending question.
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| You are the architect of my smile
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2010-01-09
And you are a master architect of words. This is a towering edifice, but also very accessible.
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| There's a Circus in my Shower!
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2010-01-09
Lazarus, in a perfect world I would discover your wonderful poems wherever I went (well so far the perfect part seems to be holding true). This ending made me smile. As a poet, nobody could ever say that you were 'wet behind the ears'.
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