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Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2024 by Ann Wood

2023-12-22
Thanks for your positive approach,
May Jesus protect this holy world,
From poverty, war and ill-fate,
I admire your noble attitude,
You are behaving like a mother,
May Jesus save this Cosmos
In general and our sacred world,
In particular via His Divine power,
Happy Christmas and New Year!


Merry Christmas everyone

2023-12-22
Christmas is special for me,
I was using Loyola college
And also YMCA to exercise,
They only provided space,
To be used by youngsters,
I used them when I was 17,
Jesus knows me thoroughly,
He would have noticed me
And admired my stamina,
I was giving him company
When everyone left,
I love Jesus deeply
And He also loves me,
We mutually love surely,
My religion is Hinduism,
But, I love Jesus
And also Xmas,
Thanks for your greetings!


A MERRY XMAS & A HAPPY NEW YEAR

2023-12-22
Thanks for your kind message,

Yours is the very first greetings,

For the arriving year 2024,

I reciprocate with thanks,

May God be with you always!


Mother

2023-08-15
Due to mother, our hope won't wither!

Her feather-like touch gives a congenial weather!

For our peace, she will think, she will see that we don't sink!

Her feathery touch will remove every glitch on our pitch!

She will debug all the problems through her hug!

Her caress will increase our prowess to make our mood marvelous!

Our cries, she dries and brings ties with God in the Skies!

SUPERB POEM MY DEAR POETIC FRIEND! THANKS A LOT!


God Will Strengthen My Will

2023-08-15
Dear Griffonner,

Thanks for your kind comment,

My broken feelings, you could cement,

When you are there, why should I lament?

From the Almighty, your words are sent!

I am cured now one hundred percent,

You have perfumed my poem with holy patting scent,

Colossal confidence, to me, you have kindly lent,

"Pats of noble people act like God" is what by me meant!


1. MAKE BELIEVE

2023-07-10
Your poem gives me an inspiration,
To achieve what is just impossible,
It pushes me forward with hope,
To extend my hands with mirth,
And achieve all my great dreams,
Though I have crossed sixty four!


I Will Not Forget

2023-03-07
Those who suffered in life
Will enjoy this poem deeply!


Googbye January 2023 by Ann Wood

2023-02-03
Ode to January is indeed heart-touching,
Strange feeling, it is definitely fetching,
February will now toward March march,
With its hours, minutes and seconds' torch!


No comfort but perhaps an opportunity

2023-02-03
Many geniuses are fighting against diseases,
Still certain diseases elude mankind easily,
Humanity has to accept it as fully inevitable,
Prayer alone is the one and only answer,
That will give the needed solace certainly,
A sad poem that gives disturbance to mind!


HAPPY HEAVENLY BIRTHDAY DAD BY ANN WOOD

2023-02-03
A tragic poem that gives dolorous feelings,
God has made this world with a purpose,
His plans are inscrutable, but has meaning,
I like the theme of this poem very much,
All must leave this world, but if some leave
Our heart is crushed with no solace at all!


The Child Trembled

2023-02-03
Superb description about a child,
Truly great and gives us wisdom,
So, let us treat a child kindly,
How such a delicate thing
Can face war and its atrocities?
Is God having no mercy at all?
Or is there no God at all here?
Nice poem to make us ponder!


LAST DAY OF DECEMBER 2022 BY ANN WOOD

2023-01-05
I reciprocate your views!


Happy New Year 2023 by Ann Wood

2023-01-05
Great attitude that deserves approbation!


Napoleon's Victories

2022-12-06
The poem gives lots of historical details,
But, the rhyming of the poem is superb,
All the best dear to write many more poems
And give us the same thrill like this one gave!


Give me a reason - Why?

2022-07-14
This life is for a very short span,
To be happy, we must make a plan,
We must do whatever we surely can,
We must live happily with our clan,

Thousands of defeats may arise,
We mustn't meet life with cries,
At a stage each and everyone dies,
End is an exclusive plan of the Skies

I pity people who lose their heart,
When a person refuses to comfort,
Time is damn short, get up, be smart,
Hoping with optimism is the best art!


THE MOON AND THE SUN

2022-06-20
Moon makes World dark,
But, it keeps the World cool,
Sun makes the World bright,
But, it makes the weather hot,
One compensates for the loss
Another punishes for the gain,
What a contrast in God's Nature!


I'M TALKING!

2022-06-20
I have developed a fascination for your language,
Finding out the real meaning makes me a true sage,
Modernity inflicts on English every possible damage,
But, with meaning, a different English, you manage!


LOOKING IN TO THE MIRROR

2022-06-20
Dear, I have the same feelings when I look into the mirror,
To find out every old man's emotion is your greatest power!


THINKING OUT

2022-06-20
Mutual reaching out is real progress,
There lies a writer's true prowess,
He who gives peace to all is a genius,
For him, God gives love in surplus!


JUST PUTTING FINGER TO KEYBORD

2022-06-05
When our writings are read,
By greatest joy, we are led,
We sleep merrily on the bed,
Runs into our body, fresh blood,
Enormous peace does flood,
We have a very proud head,
Our sorrows just fall dead,
Views are to a writer bread,
Go ahead, please go ahead!


SEEING A CHILD WITH MUM AND DAD

2022-06-05
Your heart is pure gold,
A kind mind, you hold,
I agree with what you told,
We are in the same mold,
To smile, one must be bold,
By love, let us be controlled,
A great truth is freely sold,
We must love and grow old!


THOSE WHO DO READ - THOSE WHO DO NOT READ

2022-06-05
When a person has written something
And if we find in the writing a good thing,
We must immediately to express spring
To bring in that person coolest spring
We must reach that person's ring
And swing into action to make him sing,
You tell the truth and I am now praising!


Playing in the rain by Ann Wood

2022-06-05
You have penned a beauty,
The meaning is indeed pretty,
We get in our heart a cavity,
When we see kids' nobility,
We have lost that fine quality,
Our life is filled with duty,
At last it becomes a nullity,
Your poem talks about penalty,
We impose on us and we pity,
Nice poetry with perfect clarity!


Old Age Makes me a Sage

2022-05-09
I am surprised by my own poem,
It carries good meaning and truth,
I am awed by the way I wrote it,
I feel now confident over my talent,
Thanks to poet bay.com for its help,
World is fine if our heart is peaceful!


Are Regrets my Only Assets?

2022-05-09
Dear Ken D Williams,

I am honored by your encouraging comment.

I am now a retired man for the past three years, but by

Corona, I as well as the whole World was and is baffled.

Forgive me for a delayed reply.

Once again thanks a lot my dear friend!


PENS

2021-11-01
During college days or my early days of employment,
I would use only one pen and preserve it perfectly,
I would purchase only one refill as a standby,
That pen would serve for a very long time,
I would write my exams in college with no worry,
If we have limited assets as per our needs,
We will be careful, frugal and also damn happy,
If our assets are too much, agony sets in soon,
Nice poem and I admire its truth and simplicity!


PENS

2021-11-01
Superb lines that tell the truth,
I often give a pack of 20 pens
That wrote finely as my gift,
One pack costs me Rs. 60 only,
I give at times another pack
With 20 pens, but costs Rs. 200,
Truly speaking when I buy this pack
For me to write, the pens go away,
As 20 pens are there to my credit,
I use them carelessly with no brain,
I scold my wife and daughter
Though they never at all touched it,
I used to cry by asking my wife sadly
"Where did go all those pens dear?"
She would reply that she was unaware,
The poet has chosen a simple topic
And created a fine poem to tell the truth,
All the best dear for your lovely write!


An Act of Hope

2021-11-01
When I met a 99 year old poet at his home,
He kindly asked me to write in my own way,
I was criticized for forced rhyme by some,
After reading my poems in his anthology,
He firmly told that I was on the right track,
I should follow it rigidly with no confusion,
He infused confidence to opt for originality,
I am fortunate to have had such a poet,
He was a close friend of late Abdul Kalam,
A great former President of Mother India!
Here the poet has finely placed his ideas,
I feel I am superbly guided by his write!


To Sister, This Heartfelt Sonnet of Love

2019-09-16
The poet has given an affectionate confession
Over his sister having given him financial concession
I am moved very much by his frank expression
As she has offered him kindly monetary cushion
His appreciation via a poem is a noble recognition
And he openly makes kindly a frank admission
In this World with all having a selfish emotion
Coming across such a sister gives great jubilation
May God always sustain this relation with affection
And help in peace promotion with a merciful decision!


Night Prayer

2017-10-08
This poem tells the truth openly
Poet has expressed his grievances
Nowhere he has talked about joy
That itself makes this a real beauty
I feel everyone suffers in some way
Only a poet could tell it openly
This gives him solace denied to others
I pat the poet for his genuine ideas
May God bless him with true peace
And give that to us also with love.

mvvenkataraman


Fallen Soldier

2017-01-20
Many noble souls realize
And pay deep respects
To those soldiers who died
While safeguarding our lives

I am proud of this poet
As he remembers them
And has taken true pains
To write a rhyming couplet

We live with maximum peace
Mainly due to these soldiers
They must be remembered
Forever with great gratitude.

mvvenkataraman


Mindful Breathing

2016-12-06
A simple act called, 'Breathing' is chosen
And the poet has analyzed it skillfully
He has rhymed the poem so nicely
We can't stop enjoying for obvious reason

I truly now wonder to feel 'breathing'
As that is automatically taking place
We must surely admire body's grace
The poem is like breathing soothing.

mvvenkataraman


Humiliation

2016-12-06
Though theoretically women have freedom
In practical life, they are only humiliated
Women are very easily misunderstood
This poem, I feel, tells the whole truth

Poetess must be greatly educated
She must be from a great Nation
But, she herself feels like that
Then, she writes based on facts

We can't bluff by not accepting this
This is the situation everywhere
We must gradually change the trend
And give women fullest freedom.

mvvenkataraman


HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ALL ON POETBAY!

2016-01-01
Thank you dear
You give cheer
Happy New Year
Is now here.

mvvenkataraman


News or Propaganda?

2015-06-02
On the one side, men go to Mars
And try to analyze lives of Stars
On the other side men cover face
And refuse to allow freedom's grace

When men will love and enjoy unity
When will he pray to every Almighty
Future days will be damn hard surely
As World is forgetting the Lord truly

A kind of fear grips my mind now
As human beings forget easily love
A craze for money and power is okay
But, religious hatred makes heart decay.

mvvenkataraman


Religion...

2015-04-27
Religion is the main source of racism
And of course nerve-shattering terrorism
You have told only the half-truth
Bad effect of religion is indeed mammoth.

mvvenkataraman


Strong Effort will Comfort

2015-04-27
Dear Ashe,

Amazed by your comment
My kind thanks are sent
My mood, you could uplift
Now, sorrow has fully left.

mvvenkataraman


Possession of Depression

2014-12-25
My thanks to Ashe.


How can I ever forget you?

2014-05-02
A simple, clear and plain write
But, it possesses great might
This poem mesmerizes my mind
Lots of truths, in this, I find.

mvvenkataraman


cockroach sutra

2014-03-02
Though I love the principles of Lord Buddha
I immediately kill a cockroach without remorse
As It will spread lots of diseases very easily
I never allow a cockroach to escape once seen
I like this poem very much as it is philosophical.

mvvenkataraman


Advantage of Courage

2014-01-02
Dear Friendly Poet,

You have made my New Year glorious
For your sake, I must write nobly
Thank you dear brother for your pat
May God bless you to inspire poor me.

mvvenkataraman


Giving Up is a Wrong Step

2013-05-07
Dear friend,

You have at last given a positive comment
I am sure that will help me write better
Thanks for reading my simple poetry
Hope in future I will try to improve.

mv venkataraman


Fear Cripples Whole Cheer

2013-05-07
Dear ngaio Beck,

Accept my gratitude for your support
I pray that I must please you further
Kindly bless me to write better dear
I truly need your kind comments.

mv venkataraman


Prudence is Holding Confidence

2013-05-07
Dear galateus (The PoetBay support member heart!)

Due to your colossal support only
I am able to write here happily
You have also given me praise
That is to me like Sun-rise
I thank you for your patting
As you help me do batting.

mv venkataraman


Mother and daughter

2013-03-10
At this young age such a wisdom
Truly your daughter is very lucky
Your expression promotes love
A love that is holy and sacred.

mvvenkataraman


Lance Armstrong

2013-01-20
Of course he won through doping
But, he was not a criminal at all
He won medals wrongly only
He deprived chance to another

A genuine athlete lost gold medal
Systematic testing was just absent
We must accuse only the system
Such a famous event had lapses

After taking pills to abort a child
If parents fail to achieve their wish
And if the child is born defective
God and parents are to blame

I am indeed very sad for this news
Please pardon him and pray for him
May be doping brought him cancer
And he won over it with will-power

His story is a lesson for cancer patients
He indeed is a great hero for this cure
He must be asked to give lecture often
To encourage cancer patients superbly

I beg authorities not to make a big issue
Even Jesus was cruelly crucified by men
Lance did not hurt anyone or any mind
Fame and name made him get shame

Please do not scold him as he is human
A doping song writer may win Oscar
Can we call it right or can we ban him?
Pardoning him is the best action now

I do not justify his act saying it as right
But, he must not be beaten by words
I only shed tears for that great soul
May God give him peace and solace.

mvvenkataraman


Shun those Causing Confusion

2013-01-20
Dear Poet,

Noble souls give peace of mind
They are the Angels on Earth
You are one such Angel dear
I am indebted to your comment.

mvvenkataraman


Bury Bad-secret in Heart-casket

2012-12-09
Thanks for your kind comment
I am boosted by your praise
I am honored by your patting
Hopefully I will write better

mvvenkataraman


Under The Shady Tree

2012-08-03
Dear Morning Star,
Your poem is above-par
I liked it very much
Its contents are rich.

mvvenkataraman


light and dark

2012-06-10
Every soul is like this rescued
It is left to us to use it wisely
What is the use of wasting love
By getting confused or irritated?
You have got now a life-boat
Do not just float, reach the shore
Start to live and be mirthful please.

mvvenkataraman