| Life in the Military
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2017-01-23
You have a real talent for this style of writing, I like how all your sentences rhyme and come together. It makes the poem sound classic.
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| Meeting up
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2017-01-20
I like your descriptiveness, it makes the poem more real. Nicely done.
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| Fallen Soldier
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2017-01-20
This is the best Veteran's Day poem I've ever read.
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| WHEN DIAGNOSED
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2016-11-19
The second to last paragraph of text, "when you accept yourself, your life will only become better." That's a great line for a great poem. Well done.
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| Written words
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2016-11-19
deep.
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| I see you # 2
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2016-11-19
That's good man.
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| Suzanne's Dolly Gift
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2016-11-13
This is the best I've seen on this site in a while, I really like this, the way it seems tragic but shifts to beauty in the end. That's something I can relate to.
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| Again, I'm leaving
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2016-10-28
I can relate to that. Well done.
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| Black Night
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2016-10-27
I like the way it's simply written yet has such a deep meaning.
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| A Rendezvous to Dine at Five
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2016-10-25
I admire the way you lead off without capitalizing your words, it gives an idea of incompleteness, but the poems ends very much complete.
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| Sittin on This Dock on Poetbay
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2016-10-25
I had to listen to Otis Redding after reading the title, great poem.
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| Night Mirror
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2016-10-25
Simple and perfect.
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| On Writing
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2016-10-22
ml;
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| Sleepless Sleep
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2016-10-16
Very well written, I like it.
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| On Writing
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2016-10-13
I love it.
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| Oct 1994
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2016-10-13
I think you are very brave for putting this story out there..a hell of a lot braver than the devil who hurt you. Thank you for sharing this, I appreciate it, and I can see the pain within the words. I'm so sorry that happened to you.
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| weeping through the panes
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2016-10-04
I love the way this is written, imperfect yet flawless.
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| A home doesn't have to have four walls ...
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2016-10-02
That's beautiful.
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| poems by november
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2016-10-02
The Christening was my favorite, well written
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| Life In The Dash
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2016-09-17
I enjoyed your poem, it speaks to a truth about the way life is, fleeting and alone, no matter what we do. Well done. I was wondering if you were available, I'd like to ask you for some help on a writing assignment of my own?
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| A Mother's Dream
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2016-08-28
It's sad yet so truthful, and in a way its tragically beautiful.
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