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World Today

2017-01-27
Well said (:


Life in the Military

2017-01-23
You have a real talent for this style of writing, I like how all your sentences rhyme and come together. It makes the poem sound classic.


Meeting up

2017-01-20
I like your descriptiveness, it makes the poem more real. Nicely done.


Fallen Soldier

2017-01-20
This is the best Veteran's Day poem I've ever read.


Lovelorn Tankas- the first movement

2016-11-22
Number two is my favorite, reminds me of myself. great work.


A Fragile World

2016-11-19
This is very vivid, and nice, awesome poem.


WHEN DIAGNOSED

2016-11-19
The second to last paragraph of text, "when you accept yourself, your life will only become better." That's a great line for a great poem. Well done.


Written words

2016-11-19
deep.


I see you # 2

2016-11-19
That's good man.


Better Not To Be a Shoe

2016-11-13
haha, I love it, that was a good one.


Suzanne's Dolly Gift

2016-11-13
This is the best I've seen on this site in a while, I really like this, the way it seems tragic but shifts to beauty in the end. That's something I can relate to.


Remembering Foster Care

2016-11-07
that's an interesting and different way to grow up I think. I like the words you used to describe some of the things as well.


Again, I'm leaving

2016-10-28
I can relate to that. Well done.


Black Night

2016-10-27
I like the way it's simply written yet has such a deep meaning.


Over-Thinking You

2016-10-27
I love the way each line rhymes, awesome work.


Ramblings 357

2016-10-26
I relate far too much to self destruction. Great poem.


A Rendezvous to Dine at Five

2016-10-25
I admire the way you lead off without capitalizing your words, it gives an idea of incompleteness, but the poems ends very much complete.


The Myth of Love

2016-10-25
Imperfect perfection, I love this idea.


Sittin on This Dock on Poetbay

2016-10-25
I had to listen to Otis Redding after reading the title, great poem.


Night Mirror

2016-10-25
Simple and perfect.


Membrane

2016-10-25
I like it.


On Writing

2016-10-22
ml;


Ramblings 355

2016-10-21
You're a good, kind person. Sometimes bad things happen and they seem to swallow us up whole and spit us back out. But you just have to remember that you made it, you made it out alive. Stay strong, I know you can :)


Me & Him

2016-10-16
How do you add pictures? Do you have to be a paid member or something, great pic by the way love (: congrats


Sleepless Sleep

2016-10-16
Very well written, I like it.


On Writing

2016-10-13
I love it.


Oct 1994

2016-10-13
I think you are very brave for putting this story out there..a hell of a lot braver than the devil who hurt you. Thank you for sharing this, I appreciate it, and I can see the pain within the words. I'm so sorry that happened to you.


Help

2016-10-08
I feel you so hard right now, and I'm mad as hell that I can't compose myself.


weeping through the panes

2016-10-04
I love the way this is written, imperfect yet flawless.


It'll Never Come

2016-10-04
I completely agree, bravo.


A home doesn't have to have four walls ...

2016-10-02
That's beautiful.


Maturity

2016-10-02
Simplistic and so true.


poems by november

2016-10-02
The Christening was my favorite, well written


A totally self indulgent, self gloating poem that is absolutely true

2016-09-23
Nice one


Impulsive

2016-09-18
Ha, good one


Life In The Dash

2016-09-17
I enjoyed your poem, it speaks to a truth about the way life is, fleeting and alone, no matter what we do. Well done. I was wondering if you were available, I'd like to ask you for some help on a writing assignment of my own?


Shards

2016-08-28
Brilliant.


A Mother's Dream

2016-08-28
It's sad yet so truthful, and in a way its tragically beautiful.