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This makes me curious to learn more about Colin. The familiar worrying after someone with a bit of distance now is poignant. Relating all the things you do to what that person would think of it. This is super relatable but also unique. Thank you for sharing this.

tales told in passing

The form of this is so clever! I also enjoyed the tone here: calm, pensive. Great job!

Breaking News

I love how you count out the bones. I felt like I was walking through a journey with you-- walking through your thoughts. This instills a comforting sort of melancholy. Thank you for sharing it.

And Maybe, Just Maybe

This sentiment of longing is so relatable and in many ways ou're. It filled me with nostalgia-- the unadulterated adoration you feel for someone, before you notice any flaws, when you think, they're just perfect to me. Beautiful.


This reminds me of Regina Spektor's song, "Fidelity," where she mentions always having one foot on the ground. Shying away from the risk of giving love to those who might return it, keeping that safety net, keeps us from getting hurt. The trepidation and frustration really comes through here. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Midnight Eyes

The tension of the standoff is very engaging!