With inspiration from Night Soul Woman's poem!

Elements of life part 1 (my contribution to Zoya's- Aliena' s element challenge)

Let the light shine on bright

like the fire in my life . . .

Let the ashes blow over the earth

and out in cosmos creating . . .

stardust to nebula . . .

a solar system

Come rain, come sun

and cleans my soul pure as gold

with the water from heaven

falling down . . .

from the hills of Mount Zion

Let the wind be my ride . . .

and let the stars guide my journey

when the element goes together

in the story of my life

Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-11-05 at 15:26

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Zoya Zaidi
Very befitting answer to Carmen's poem...
Love, Zoya

Kathy Lockhart
Dan your poetry is beautiful. I want to stand and let its refreshing purity rain down upon me and cleanse me. Ahhhhh!

night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem is like souls song the moment after death, just before she becomes one with the elements again :)
Well written Dan! *applause*


Blowing in the wind
by Dan Cederholm