With inspiration from Night Soul Woman's poem!


Elements of life part 1 (my contribution to Zoya's- Aliena' s element challenge)


Let the light shine on bright

like the fire in my life . . .

Let the ashes blow over the earth

and out in cosmos creating . . .

stardust to nebula . . .

a solar system


Come rain, come sun

and cleans my soul pure as gold

with the water from heaven

falling down . . .

from the hills of Mount Zion


Let the wind be my ride . . .

and let the stars guide my journey

when the element goes together

in the story of my life









Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2006-11-05 at 15:26

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Zoya Zaidi
Very befitting answer to Carmen's poem...
(((hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-11-05


Kathy Lockhart
Dan your poetry is beautiful. I want to stand and let its refreshing purity rain down upon me and cleanse me. Ahhhhh!
2006-11-05


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
This poem is like souls song the moment after death, just before she becomes one with the elements again :)
Well written Dan! *applause*
2006-11-05

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Blowing in the wind
by Dan Cederholm