Losing against the rain

she took her shoes
and walked out into the rain

only to die
in the freezing night

but once again...

The rain died first
and her dreams are forced to live on...




Poetry by Cr4Ky
Read 461 times
Written on 2005-08-28 at 23:25

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email
dott Print text



Cr4Ky
Thank you:D
2005-08-29


satansprostitute
I loved this text, it is just great, nothing more to say. Keep up.
2005-08-29


MaybeMemories
I love this. I could tell it would be awesome by the title, and it really is. I dont even know what else to say. The wording is excellent. You are so talented. Great job =)

-nikkki
2005-08-29