Just thought it might be nice to post something from the notepad and showing a little sign of life;)


Star-struck

Star-struck by your being
Iím blind, beyond repair
Broke my eyes like glass
But i`m not running in despair

Donít need my eyes for seeing
Theyíre useless anyway
Because the presence of you, shining
Would be all Iíd ever see

The sun is bright and shiny
But gets dirty when compared
To your supreme existence
Not even the devil was prepared

Oh, he haunted and he tortured
Tormented, made me scream
But it stopped like a clock on a Sunday
Silently, but extreme

It blew up in my face
Parts of clockwork everywhere
Now Iím with a descended being
Seeing angels everywhere

The sun is bright and shiny
But getís dirty when compared
To your supreme existence
Not even the devil was prepared

Oh, he haunted and he tortured
Tormented, made me scream
But it stopped like a clock on a Sunday
Silently, but extreme




Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2011-03-07 at 09:24

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John Ashleigh
I was engrossed within the lines of your poem. This deserves the editors choice, indeed. I hope we see more of your poetry? Keep sharing.

Regards,
John.
2011-03-16


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2011-03-09


Cr4Ky
Thanks a lot!
It`s been almost a complete year i think, since i last posted, so it was time to do something about it:) have been busy studying and just never got around to do anything creative (except some notebook-texts like this one)
2011-03-07



Very strong lines
a compelling read
and quite a welcome back
after a period of being away!
2011-03-07