chamber of glass


Why did I have to put you through all that
All that pain
I was locked inside a chamber of glass
My hands on the walls
I see you clearly now
I see all your pain
But I feel nothing
except for the pain of feeling nothing
So I force myself to understand what your going through
this is my new found infinite sorrow
a bottomless pit where tears will fall
I break slowly my heart by having to break yours
there is no connection to divergent souls
no one will share this feeling
Thank God for that






Poetry by C.B.Yamba
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Written on 2006-08-17 at 05:52

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Amanda K
That was a pleasure to read. i love how words flow here and depict feelings of sadness and grief.
2006-09-06


Teala
Dark and vivid--self-realisation!!
2006-08-21


Kathy Lockhart
Seeing our own reflection sometimes brings pain but also brings change! Poignant Piece. kathy
2006-08-17


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
When the victimiser becomes the victim of his own actions!

Well written my friend!

From you chamber of glass you can clearly see what is happening but that means that you don't breath that's why the chamber is not foggy! Breath otherwise you will die!

The oxygen will help you process things better in your mind, find a solution to the problem!More oxygen will go to your muscles, you will relax.

Rest and the silence will give you the answer the echo is just noise that comfuses your head!
(read my monologue echoes and you will understand)

Silence is balance what is noise?
Feeling nothing means that you feel everything!

What an inspirational and thought provoking poem! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

Take care
2006-08-17


Dan Cederholm
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So sad but yet a strong poem here my

friend!!! A chamber of glass then I think of echo echo eco ( ( ( ( ( ( (echo))))))))))
But a can feel that you feel sorrow!!!

Great writing as usually!!!

Regards Dan

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2006-08-17