I Long

I long for the woman who longs for me
I kiss her when she bends her neck to me
I hug her when she opens her arms
I hold her tight, I hold her hard
and I make love to her
until she says baby I can't
take any more. and I love, I love her

to Venus, I love you!



Poetry by mars
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Written on 2006-11-02 at 10:59

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Kathy Lockhart
Well now Venus is a much loved goddess. I long to be her. Aw the limits of mortality.
2006-11-02



A couple of typos Mars, but that aside. A very romantic read which I am sure Venus will truly appreciate as Tai does. It is good when there is balanced emotions in love.
2006-11-02


loomer
sweet!
2006-11-02