dirty

All I've ever done is dirty
I've tried to cleanse these rotten deeds
Inevitable is the hurting
When pain is your disease
A soul is bound to suffer
When doused in gasoline
To fire I've never been a fighter
So the flame just burns consumingly
To me this is no disaster
But you shouldn't take opinions from me
I'm nothing more than a cruel bastard
Spectatng and smiling from the scene



Poetry by Steven Sabula
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Written on 2007-01-19 at 09:03

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Zoya Zaidi
It is better to err and repent, then not to have remorse at all. You have realised your mistake and that in it self takes the 'dirt' away from your deed... So, do not blame your self but try to make amends and you shall be forgiven, by the one you have wronged and God himself- the greatest forgiver of all and every one...
(((hugs for the nice work))))
Love, Zoya
2007-01-19



All I can say about this poem, which does not in my mind describe dirty at all, is that at least you recognise where you were going wrong and that enables you to change. Good thought provoking poem though. Fire fighters are us! Tai
2007-01-19