along side my waters





I search amongst waste
put my ear to the ground
and listen for steps not comming

and in my heart the wall grows
into a protection against the fragile
as you search along side my waters



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-02-03 at 07:33

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Katherine this is so powerful a two stanza masterpiece with images that nurse the mind as you
listen to the steps not coming

figuratively I guess but in reality we each have
footsteps that we listen for and when we dont hear them i guess we ring fence our heart to protect it from pain

in this case you seem to find an inner peace from the fact he is thinking about you searching for some way to express a
caring about your fragility

well done this is a beautiful poem and in my favs rgds Michael
2007-02-03