in awe

perhaps not perfect
or like a rose withering
as winter takes controll

still a hope lingering
in petals browning
life a way back

in the warmth of the fading sun
I walk in awe of dreams passing

Poetry by kath
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Written on 2009-03-31 at 08:40

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful, so much feeling in this

Elle x

Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
...but hopefully more roses to come with the return of Spring. A beautifully evocative poem. Peter

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
beautiful - too many words would be too much

Elle x

John Ashleigh
....and I'm in awe of this poem.


Stan Cooper
Metaphoric Kath...
beautiful poem

xxx Stan