well folks..here is a poem to begin with..!


again

and he tried to dream again.......

elope above the dark..be it any colour...he tried to paint again....

not knowing he was there..he tried to be there again..

thought for a while and shut his eyes...not knowing he would stare again.....

rubeed against the virtual he...shook the hands of real again..........

hollow was the vision defined....he filled his eyes with never again.....

one foot on good the other on bad.. the moon and sun met never again.....

but one did leave for one to arrive...the morning tasted bitter again....



Poetry by anirudh
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Written on 2007-03-08 at 19:24

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nature
another well composed write keep it up
2007-08-07


anirudh
@zoya....

thanx a lot ..i am honored..!

and @the other guy..man i dont know these technicalities..i am a begginer...!
2007-03-09


Zoya Zaidi
Dear Anirudh, this is a very thought provoking poem, well concieved with a lot of thought gone into it.
Welcome to the bay!
Love, Zoya
2007-03-08


Individuality
ellipses - the dots used to show continuation of thought, three dots is the correct use. also overuse of them takes away their power i feel. a good poem though too much use with the ellipses here.
2007-03-08