Touching Amber (An Etheree)



One.
Softer
subtle care
touching amber
within tender glow
as passive brown eyes blink
reciting passion's story
beyond the realms of hidden truths
for the prize that waits there to behold
within the gentle hand of lover's heart.
Caressing magic moment for itself,
he shares in the pieces she shall give
when day is done and night falls soft.
Upon the heart of subtle,
with tender sharing time,
bond unites to one
in whispered breath
of meaning
for the
two.

Copyright © 2007
Pamela A. Lamppa
(All Rights Reserved)



***Etheree
The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can
also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Get creative and write an Etheree with
more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count.

Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

...Triple Etheree, Quadruple Etheree, and so on!

Resource: www.shadowpoetry.com***





Poetry by Pamela A Lamppa
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Written on 2007-03-31 at 22:27

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Pam this is a wonderful poem form and i never realised it was known as an etheree i always associated it with being a richtameter but this is wonderful i will try it my self
this is wonderful to see you back here again Pam

your poetry has always been a leading example to me

rgds Mike

you are such a welcome member here
2007-04-01


Individuality
nice to see someone posting some different forms here, have some etheree but not double like you have here, nice written and presented.
2007-03-31