seek




a silence waiting
shadows talking
in days searching

seek my rough scars
ask my name
as the broken sentence mends



Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-09-04 at 18:19

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Kathy Lockhart
oh gosh, this is visual poetry too. Wonderful poetry Kath.
I get lost in it and enjoy my wanderings.
2007-09-05


Rob Graber
I cannot help adding two powerful associations to line 4: Jesus telling Thomas to feel his wounds, and--somewhat contrarily--a favorite saying of Thomas Jefferson's: "Take every job by the smooth handle"--based I think on the fact that the wood handles of hand-held farm implements wore smooth at the best gripping places; meaning that one ought not do things the hard way. Such a rich, rich line of poetry that really is.
2007-09-04


Rob Graber
"seek my rough scars"--an awesome line in a strikingly beautiful text.
2007-09-04


J. E.
Wisdom in few words. Great poem.
2007-09-04


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a wonderful take on the word seek a wonder ful use of images and metaphors well done rgd Michael
2007-09-04