A pantun, but not a very skillful one.


Would You Weep?

Would you weep for me
if I suddenly were gone?
Take my hand and tell me now
---do you love me?...

If I suddenly were gone
where would you then go?
Do you love me enough
to watch me turn away?

Where would you go?
Somewhere in the past where
you wouldn't have to watch me turn away?
That's something I know you'll never forget...

Somewhere in the cloudy past
you took my hand and told me
something I know I'll never forget, though worry strikes me now...
...do I love you?---





Poetry by Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
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Written on 2008-09-27 at 06:56

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Morgan Cellohead
I hope I would, but let's not find out.

"If I leave here tomorrow, would you still remember me?"
- Free Bird, by Lynyrd Skynyrd
2008-10-10


TubaGiant
for what it is worth
I would weep if you suddenly were gone
I hope clarity in this area comes to you
2008-09-27