Green bubbles


The surface is ember
illumine and heartbeats
red shivering rings
made out of salt and motion

you are a tiny swirl
rushing upwards

in rains of air
caressing
sliding deeper
my palest colour

and its cold below
and its green like glass
and there is a soft glowing spot
where the big void begins





Poetry by Celeste
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Written on 2008-11-17 at 21:24

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2008-11-23


J. E.
I agree with the editors, an excellent write. Vivid imagery and a great sense of mystique. Welcome to the bay!
2008-11-18