Darkness

The dark clouds are sailing in over me and it hurts so bad, that sun wount shine down on me. Its just dark clouds on my path, the grass is not green anymore and leafs are getting brown, the flowers are dying and i can't find peace within my heart, its getting hard to move further down the path, when only thing you see is your shadows, whoes trying to pull you back. The past wount let you go, cause the future is darker than ever before and i'm getting weaker and weaker and my soul is about to be sold to the devil, cause then I would have peace, and I can live my life in the darkness, its the only future I can see now.



Poetry by Peter Bakke
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Written on 2006-01-19 at 13:38

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Veld Cooper
Deeply moving, Peter. Know exactly where you are.
Veld
2006-01-20


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
KNow what you mean.
this poem has touched me as all I can see at the moment is darkness and I'm usually v.positive.
LOVE what you wrote ,but maybe you could space it out a bit more.
5/5
Liz
2006-01-20


Zoya Zaidi
Never say die, my dear boy!
'Cause tomorrow is another day!
It will bring hope, and things will change!
'Cause night does not remain always,
Day will rise & dispell the dark,
A new day will arrive, listen to it hark!
NOW THE SUN IS SHINING BRIGHT!
Now, everything is gonna be alright!

(((come to me I'll hug you tight)))))
And you will feel, bright alright!!!
love,xx, Zoya
2006-01-19