Just a poem. It has been a long time since I wrote something, I need to get back on horse so to speak.
As I said; I'm trying to start writing again, so I need all the constructive critisisem I can get.
your eyes captivated me.
The earth seemed to shift underneath my feet,
I stubled where I stood.
Your smile brought the sun out from the clouds,
my skin was suddenly flushed,
When our hands touched I nearly stutterd,
your skin was so smooth and dry,
My workhardende hands nearly shook in you grip,
jet your hold on me was firm.
You were perfection and you gifted me a miracle,
when you did not let me go.
Poetry by Dilla
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Written on 2009-07-06 at 19:22
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As I said; I'm trying to start writing again, so I need all the constructive critisisem I can get.
The miracle of you
I could not look away the first time we meet,your eyes captivated me.
The earth seemed to shift underneath my feet,
I stubled where I stood.
Your smile brought the sun out from the clouds,
my skin was suddenly flushed,
When our hands touched I nearly stutterd,
your skin was so smooth and dry,
My workhardende hands nearly shook in you grip,
jet your hold on me was firm.
You were perfection and you gifted me a miracle,
when you did not let me go.
Poetry by Dilla
Read 559 times
Written on 2009-07-06 at 19:22
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