Hate

The blood that courses through my veins is tainted... tainted with my eternal hatred for those who have hurt me.

I am tainted.

I am pure hatred.

I am sorrow incarnate.



Poetry by Nebuchadnezzar
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Written on 2009-11-07 at 20:39

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Blilith
Rwy'n gobeithio fy Cymraeg yn ddigon da, fel y dywedais yw wedi bod ar hyd amser. Mae hyn wedi cymaint flin, yr wyf yn gobeithio y byddwch yn ei gael yn hapusach.
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Blilth y Wrach Pagan
2012-01-02


Spargo Postle
those last three lines are very powerful and have a really good rhythm, they build into a scream almost.... The first line works well and it fits as a single commentary on what you feel / felt at one moment in time... how about you tell us what the inbetween bits are / were that made the character, or you, feel such passion to sit and write this down... You quite obvioulsy have a talent for expressing emotion so give us something bigger... Love Ya, Spargo Postle.
2011-09-13