Another continuation of the pieces about Beauty.


Story of Beauty

Something stopped her
From leaving
When the time
Was right

She had to be there
Without herself
When time
Took her away

Did she ever
Look back upon
The world
She gave away

Someone, somewhere
A beauty
Took her place
In the kingdom
Of indefinable grace

Sadly....

Something had her
Locked up
When the time
Passed

She had no choice
Not herself
When time
Ripped her to shreds

Did she ever
Know what was
The world
She lost

Someone, somewhere
A thief
Took her away
To the kingdom
Where beauty must die

Terribly...

Something stopped her
From leaving
When the time
Was right

She had no choice
Not herself
When time
Ripped her to shreds

Someone, somewhere
A beauty
Took her place
In the kingdom
Of indefinable grace

Never to be...





Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2009-12-11 at 19:30

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Strong pictures and emotion.. Very nicey written. There's a glimpse of a missed love.
2010-01-09


Zoya Zaidi
'A thief
Took her away
To the kingdom
Where beauty must die'

I just loved this Stanza!

A poignant write!
(((HUGS)))
Love,
Zoya
2009-12-16



A beauiful way of expressing this story of 'Beauty' I must look out for the more...I like the repeating stanza's, they kind of cement her in your time.

Merry Christmas to you

Smiling

Tai
2009-12-15