Love with Angels

my life is an unanswered question...strings of days and nights waiting for something to happen...wallowing in my self pity my soul begins to decay
tearing itself apart beneath the weight of my failure empty eyes stare out at this bleak world forced smiles gleam out at this horrible place hollow laughs permeate the horror of humanity i gaze upon our pathetic existence repulsed by the cruelty in all of us the nature of man

you carry on oblivious to the mayhem around you a fallen angel incapable of even imagining mans evil untainted untouched you float through our midst with unparalelled beauty a mere mortal such as me could never be worthy enough to even be looked upon by you

and yet i see that glint your sparkling eye i see myself reflected in it a smile opens wide across your mouth and i become lost in your lips you glide towards me i feel an intense pressure in my mind a link is made between angel and mortal my brain explodes with pleasure so intense i lose conciousness

i awake and find you by my side

~pure bliss~




Words by The Metallica Warrior
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Written on 2010-09-23 at 20:47

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2010-10-04


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
I enjoyed this, very descriptive with some good imagery. Nice ending too!

Language: 5
Format: 4
Overall: 4
Mood: 5
2010-09-28