Three verse Haiku


Doggie Sitting

Dog sitting spastic
Year old Australian Shepherd
Stop, you're herding me

Meows, growls, hissing
Will not deter pup's torments
Cat, catatonic

Stairs more hazardous
Straddling a canine's snout
Too wet and nosey



Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2010-11-12 at 20:37

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ngaio Beck
Fantastic form and the subject--my folks have "dogs". All kinds of dogs on the grounds. I'm a cat person myself.
Good work all 'round.
2010-12-18


John Ashleigh
This is the first three stanza haiku I've read. And to be honest - it is brilliant. Thanks for sharing.

Your friend,
John.
2010-12-15